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Rabu, 08 Mei 2013

Indie Life- Chanda Hahn

Indie Life is a monthly blog post where we as Indie Authors share a little of our life.

So you want to be an INDIE AUTHOR?

When I typed the very last sentence of my book, I jumped from my computer chair and did a little dance. Yesssss! But now what? I studied the market, found my dream list of agents, wrote personalized query letters for each of them and sat and waited. I queried for a very long time on my first book The Iron Butterfly, but the agents weren't big into YA Epic Fantasy.  I never even dreamed of self publishing until UnEnchanted. 

After I wrote UnEnchanted (which was the third book I wrote total) I was querying to agents and getting manuscript requests. Yesss (Fist pump) but then nothing. Then I noticed there were tv shows that were coming out that were super similar to my idea. Fairy Tales were becoming big. So I self-published just to preserve my copyright. Not to actually become an indie author permanently, but just so I had the copyright. It was cheap and easy.  I still had dreams of getting a publishing deal somewhere. But there was one problem, my book was becoming a success! It was hard after I became Indie to go traditional. I've had agents call me, worked with one even, but by then I was making to much money as an Indie author and the traditional publishing route began to loose it's shine. So now what? Now I have to forge ahead on the route of what it means to be an Indie Author and how it would effect my life. 

So how do I become an Indie author and live this glorious Indie life? I'll try to tell you, I'm not going to tell you how a get rich, become a best selling Indie author overnight, because I can't. Even if you follow every one of the steps below, if you don't have a great book, then you won't sell.  If your book sucks? Well not much I can help you with but if your book has a story, has a voice and has an audience, then I can help you.  But for those that just typed "The End" onto the last page of their book. I may be able to direct you in what steps you need to take. 

I will also encourage any of my fellow Indelibles to open and edit this post and insert their own resources. I don't mind really!

1. Write a GREAT BOOK! Figure that is kinda the point and self explanatory. If your reading this far along in the blog than you probably already wrote one. 

2. Edit your own book. Read your book out load to yourself and try the best you can to catch your own mistakes. Thanks to author Lisa Nowak, I suggest using WORDTALK if you have a PC. And GHOSTREADER if you have a MAC. These program will read your book out loud to you. So you can take notes and make changes on pacing. I tend to skip over my own writing when reading and miss a lot of mistakes.

3. Beta readers- You are not ready for anything until you find beta readers (beta readers are test readers that will read your book and give you their opinion and even help with basic editing). Family and close friends don't count. You can find Beta readers from library groups, writing groups or even a few online. I found my very first Beta Reader Jane Hawkey from Australia. She helped me, a newbie, that had been out of college for 8 years reconnect with basic story telling and editing.  
***(Always research each site yourself before choosing. Some may charge money, some maybe free, some change hands and policies)

Places to find Beta Readers:
PERFECT IMAGINATION (This site keeps going under new management, but I use it)

4. Repeat step 2 & 3.

5. Hire an editor. I've been burned by having volunteers/friends edit my book. I've even had fans email volunteering to edit and it doesn't work out. HIRE SOMEONE! (These are editors we've worked with, find the one that works best for you.) It usually runs me around 300-500 to edit my books.


6. Hire a graphic designer to make your cover. A cover sells your book. Don't make it yourself. Believe me the readers can always tell. Here are some fab cover artists...in no particular order.


7. Format your ebook, and upload to a publishing platform.   Find the one that is right for you. Each publishing site has different ebook formatting rules and you will have to format your document for each site. They are all listed on the site.

KINDLE DIRECT PUBLISHING  a.k.a. KDP  (Amazon)
PUBIT soon to be NOOK PRESS  (Barnes & Noble)
KOBO This is the BIG Ereader for Canada
ITUNES (Apple) Kind of a pain to upload to, you need a mac.
SMASHWORDS  If you upload to smashwords and get into the premium catalog, they will distribute to Itunes, BN and KOBO for you. 

8. Wait, I'm stuck on formatting my ebook? Hire an Ebook Formatter.

ALI CROSS (Yes our very own Indelible)

9. Upload your ebook if you haven't already.

10. Format your book for paperback.
You can use an independent print publishing to make your books into paperbacks. Using Print On Demand. It's cheaper than other paperback distributers.


10. Promote Your work doesn't stop. You need to blog, tweet, facebook and promote your own book. Because you are your own agent. You can do BLOG TOURS. BLOG HOPS and do give aways on your own blog using RAFFLECOPTER But I think going into promoting your book is for a different day and post. We could fill up pages and pages on what to do after you publish. But this is what it takes to become an Indie.

So this is what it takes and all the hard work we do for each and every single book we write. This is the true life of an Indie Author.




Chanda Hahn is the author of the popular Unfortunate Fairy Tale Series which includes UnEnchanted and Fairest which have topped the ebook charts in 5 countries. She also has a passion for writing YA epic fantasy. She's been a children's librarian, children's pastor and costume mascot. She lives in the beautiful but rainy northwest that is Portland Oregon with her husband and twin childre

Selasa, 28 Agustus 2012

#indiechat 8/28/12 Critique partners and beta readers.



Feel free to leave the title, genre, one/two sentence pitch and your email to find betas!

laurapauling What a great topic! Crit partners and beta readers! #indiechat Hi everyone! -8:59 PM Aug 28th, 2012



MaganVernon Alright, one minute early, but welcome to #Indiechat We are talking critique partners and beta readers! -9:00 PM Aug 28th, 2012



MaganVernon I'm hosting tonight, but also watching Face Off, so just watch out for my live tweeting #Indiechat -9:01 PM Aug 28th, 2012



JessieHarrell probably helpful to explain the difference between betas and CPs for the folks who don't know... #indiechat -9:01 PM Aug 28th, 2012



susankayequinn Awesome topic tonight! "critique partners and beta reader" So, so important for indie authors (really any author). #indiechat -9:01 PM Aug 28th, 2012



HeatherSunseri RT @laurapauling: What a great topic! Crit partners and beta readers! #indiechat Hi everyone! -9:02 PM Aug 28th, 2012



MaganVernon Let's throw it out there. What do YOU all think the differences are between a beta and a critique partner? #Indiechat -9:02 PM Aug 28th, 2012



laurapauling Any writing advice, the top tip always seems to be find critique partners. #indiechat -9:02 PM Aug 28th, 2012



EArroyo5 Hi Everyone! #indiechat -9:02 PM Aug 28th, 2012



laurapauling For me, crit partners are more chapter to chapter or just the opening. Not as much big picture. #indiechat -9:02 PM Aug 28th, 2012



MaganVernon @EArroyo5 a welcome! We are talking crit partners and beta readers! #Indiechat -9:03 PM Aug 28th, 2012



JessieHarrell My CPs are the ones who read with a critical eye & catch everything on the micro and macro level; betas are more macro-only #indiechat -9:03 PM Aug 28th, 2012



HeatherSunseri I think of beta readers for getting an overall opinion of the story, not necessarily critique of the actual writing. #indiechat -9:03 PM Aug 28th, 2012



DougSolter Yea! Made it to #indiechat -9:04 PM Aug 28th, 2012



susankayequinn @MaganVernon Ya know, I don't fuss much re:name. Just "people willing to read my stuff" - but diff people have diff strengths #indiechat -9:04 PM Aug 28th, 2012



MaganVernon For me crit partners help with the technical and story changes, I use betas for flow. #Indiechat -9:04 PM Aug 28th, 2012



JessieHarrell picked up a tip at a conference for using teen betas: B, C, D (bored, confused, don't believe it). easy system for them to use #indiechat -9:04 PM Aug 28th, 2012



EArroyo5 CP's are more micro and macro. I see them as a marriage. While Betas are more folks you hang out with from time to time. #indiechat -9:04 PM Aug 28th, 2012



laurapauling I def. count on betas for big picture, story structure...#indiechat -9:04 PM Aug 28th, 2012



SPNHeather #indiechat So should I get a crit partner for a chapter by chapter thing? -9:04 PM Aug 28th, 2012



HeatherSunseri How many betas/CPs does one writer need? #indiechat I wrestle with this a little. -9:04 PM Aug 28th, 2012



MaganVernon How many CPs do you have? Betas? Does it vary on the story? #Indiechat -9:05 PM Aug 28th, 2012



susankayequinn I did a series on my blog called Critique Wednesdays. Here's one that has tips on critiquing: http://t.co/tafweo32 #indiechat -9:05 PM Aug 28th, 2012



JessieHarrell I have two trusted CPs and I'll take as many beta readers as I can get #indiechat -9:05 PM Aug 28th, 2012



EArroyo5 My betas vary from story to story but CP's are more constant. #indiechat -9:05 PM Aug 28th, 2012



LawsonWrites I have people who read for story others for general errors (consistency) and then editors. About three levels of readers #indiechat -9:06 PM Aug 28th, 2012



laurapauling @MaganVernon I try to match the story with beta reader's interests. Sometimes it matches up, but not always. #indiechat -9:06 PM Aug 28th, 2012



MaganVernon @SPNHeather With my CPs, we swap the hole manuscript and take to it with the track changes in word. #Indiechat -9:06 PM Aug 28th, 2012



susankayequinn @HeatherSunseri I have a Critquers of Awesome list-I'm always adding. Diff people are avail/helpful for diff books/types of crit #indiechat -9:06 PM Aug 28th, 2012



JessieHarrell @SPNHeather that would probably be helpful. you need someone willing to invest time in your story. #indiechat -9:06 PM Aug 28th, 2012



laurapauling I'm always looking for new beta readers so I don't burn out the ones I have. #indiechat -9:06 PM Aug 28th, 2012



susankayequinn Smart! @laurapauling: Im always looking for new beta readers so I dont burn out the ones I have. #indiechat -9:07 PM Aug 28th, 2012



JessieHarrell @LawsonWrites yeah, editors are a whole 'nother level. but I wouldn't pay for editing until I'd already had other CP eyes on it #indiechat -9:07 PM Aug 28th, 2012



SPNHeather @JessieHarrell well junk! LOL can't use hubby then cause he is co-author #indiechat Where do you find them -9:07 PM Aug 28th, 2012



laurapauling I have a three crit partners I met at the nescbwi conf. but we're not always at the same stage of dev. #indiechat -9:07 PM Aug 28th, 2012



HeatherSunseri @susankayequinn Great idea, Susan. Thanks. And good point. People aren't always available exactly when you need them. #indiechat -9:07 PM Aug 28th, 2012



chihuahuazero Hey guys! I almost decided not to be in #indiechat today, but... -9:07 PM Aug 28th, 2012



LawsonWrites @SPNHeather I try not to do chap by chap. Maybe several sections or the final copy. Too much input on short parts gets confusing #indiechat -9:07 PM Aug 28th, 2012



EArroyo5 I'm still looking for CPs and Betas. #indiechat -9:07 PM Aug 28th, 2012



HeatherSunseri RT @laurapauling: I'm always looking for new beta readers so I don't burn out the ones I have. #indiechat //Great idea. -9:08 PM Aug 28th, 2012



MaganVernon @laurapauling @susankayequinn I had close to 7 for HTDA and practically all Btas for Mph #Indiechat -9:08 PM Aug 28th, 2012



chihuahuazero I recently beta read a published author's work. It was a time-taking yet fun experience. #indiechat -9:08 PM Aug 28th, 2012



laurapauling Chapter to chapter critiques take so long, my crit partners never make it past Act I. #indiechat -9:08 PM Aug 28th, 2012



JessieHarrell @SPNHeather I found folks on #yalitchat - there's a group there to find others. just make sure you like their writing style #indiechat -9:08 PM Aug 28th, 2012



susankayequinn @chihuahuazero Glad you're here! ;) #indiechat -9:08 PM Aug 28th, 2012



EArroyo5 I burn out my CPs as I rely on them for high and low moments. #indiechat -9:09 PM Aug 28th, 2012



LawsonWrites I also try to find people interested in my particular subject (YA, Paranormal, Romance). #indiechat -9:09 PM Aug 28th, 2012



overdunne Hi everyone! #indiechat -9:09 PM Aug 28th, 2012



chihuahuazero I still feel sorry for giving my betas my unfinished story before its time. Speaking of which... #indiechat -9:09 PM Aug 28th, 2012



MaganVernon @chihuahuazero Welcome in! #Indiechat -9:09 PM Aug 28th, 2012



JessieHarrell @SPNHeather oh yeah, and I met a CP at an SCBWI conference (as well as many more potential ones, but time becomes a factor) #indiechat -9:09 PM Aug 28th, 2012



HeatherSunseri I don't prefer chapter to chapter. I have trouble remembering what I read prior. I prefer trading entire manuscripts. #indiechat -9:09 PM Aug 28th, 2012



MaganVernon If people are looking for CPs and betas this #Indiechat is also probably a good place to find them. -9:10 PM Aug 28th, 2012



susankayequinn @EArroyo5 This might help: http://t.co/3I4rOy2l #indiechat -9:10 PM Aug 28th, 2012



MaganVernon @overdunne Welcome! #Indiechat -9:10 PM Aug 28th, 2012



susankayequinn Very important in a crit partner @LawsonWrites: I find people interested in my particular subject (YA, Paranormal, Romance). #indiechat -9:10 PM Aug 28th, 2012



BooksOverBoys RT @MaganVernon: If people are looking for CPs and betas this #Indiechat is also probably a good place to find them. -9:11 PM Aug 28th, 2012



laurapauling @HeatherSunseri I don't think chapter to chapter can replace a full beta. #indiechat -9:11 PM Aug 28th, 2012



JessieHarrell tip: when trying out a new CP, switch just a few chapters 1st. if you don't like their writing or feedback, no sense in going on #indiechat -9:11 PM Aug 28th, 2012



laurapauling @susankayequinn But at the same time, I had an excellent beta who didn't write my genre. A very different perspective. #indiechat -9:11 PM Aug 28th, 2012



SPNHeather @MaganVernon Oh , well I could use one :) I need someone who is not a "friend" and is willing to tell me when it sucks and such #IndieChat -9:11 PM Aug 28th, 2012



EArroyo5 @susankayequinn I was actually part of critters. Had to let it go because of time. #indiechat -9:11 PM Aug 28th, 2012



susankayequinn Excellent advice! @JessieHarrell: tip: when trying out a new CP, switch just a few chapters 1st. #indiechat -9:12 PM Aug 28th, 2012



chihuahuazero My betas did some proofreading of my earlier MS. Did the same happen to you? #indiechat -9:12 PM Aug 28th, 2012



EArroyo5 I think Betas could be anyone, whether they read your genre or not. Watcha think? #indiechat -9:12 PM Aug 28th, 2012



MaganVernon There are also national groups that have local chapters and are great to find CPs. Like SCWBI and RWA #Indiechat -9:12 PM Aug 28th, 2012



susankayequinn @EArroyo5 Ah! I haven't used it - so it's not just a matchmaker, there's a time committment? #indiechat -9:12 PM Aug 28th, 2012



MaganVernon @SPNHeather Maybe check back with me after my October deadline and A could be free :) #Indiechat -9:13 PM Aug 28th, 2012



laurapauling Def. A mixed group is good. RT @EArroyo5: I think Betas could be anyone, whether they read your genre or not. Watcha think? #indiechat -9:13 PM Aug 28th, 2012



overdunne Always looking for help getting things right, but I've decided beta is better for me. Like 2 keep things close until "finished" #indiechat -9:13 PM Aug 28th, 2012



laurapauling I absolutely could not survive w/out betas! #indiechat -9:13 PM Aug 28th, 2012



chihuahuazero I once critiqued ten pieces in one week over at Critique Circle. Haven't been able to go back to the site. #indiechat -9:13 PM Aug 28th, 2012



SPNHeather @MaganVernon Awesome! I'm doing YA paranormal romance ... and we are half into our first draft #IndieChat -9:14 PM Aug 28th, 2012



susankayequinn @EArroyo5 They can be, but it helps if they understand genre conventions. Then again, a good CP can crit anything. #indiechat -9:14 PM Aug 28th, 2012



JessieHarrell @EArroyo5 I want someone to beta who is interested in my genre. prefer teens so I get a sense of whether I've gotten YA voice #indiechat -9:14 PM Aug 28th, 2012



MaganVernon Here is a touch question, how do you know when to dump a CP or beta and ow do you go about it? #Indiechat -9:14 PM Aug 28th, 2012



chihuahuazero Opinions on teen betas for YA? #indiechat -9:14 PM Aug 28th, 2012



EArroyo5 @susankayequinn There's a percentage of crits you have to maintain. At least once a week. #indiechat -9:14 PM Aug 28th, 2012



MaganVernon @SPNHeather Obviously I have the most random mixture of books in the world, ha, #Indiechat -9:15 PM Aug 28th, 2012



EArroyo5 @susankayequinn "genre conventions"? #indiechat -9:15 PM Aug 28th, 2012



JessieHarrell @SPNHeather it's great you're writing w/ someone. keeps u motivated and is a built in beta. 2 heads and all. #indiechat -9:15 PM Aug 28th, 2012



patricialynne07 Lurking in #IndieChat. Talking beta and crit partners. =) -9:15 PM Aug 28th, 2012



susankayequinn @EArroyo5 Yeah, that wouldn't work for me either. My needs flex and so do other people's. #indiechat -9:15 PM Aug 28th, 2012



EArroyo5 @chihuahuazero I had a teen beta. Loved it! #indiechat -9:15 PM Aug 28th, 2012



LawsonWrites While writing I really need someone on standby to throw ideas out to &help me keep on plot. Later I need more solid advice #indiechat -9:15 PM Aug 28th, 2012



JessieHarrell @chihuahuazero LOVE them, as long as you give them guidelines for feedback. must tell them what expecting or will be generic #indiechat -9:15 PM Aug 28th, 2012



MaganVernon @chihuahuazero I used a teen beta once. She was helpful on lingo, but not structure. I use teens more as "consultants" #Indiechat -9:15 PM Aug 28th, 2012



chihuahuazero @EArroyo5 @susankayequinn For example, the different romance "tropes" in YA. #indiechat -9:16 PM Aug 28th, 2012



HeatherSunseri RT @chihuahuazero: Opinions on teen betas for YA? #indiechat //I plan to let my teen daughter read. Does that count? ;) -9:16 PM Aug 28th, 2012



susankayequinn @EArroyo5 Like, what YA readers expect vs. hard SF. Or cozy mysteries vs. romance. #indiechat -9:16 PM Aug 28th, 2012



SPNHeather @JessieHarrell It's interesting esp. it being my husband and all :) #indiechat -9:16 PM Aug 28th, 2012



SPNHeather @MaganVernon I like that though #indiechat -9:16 PM Aug 28th, 2012



EArroyo5 @susankayequinn Gotcha. Makes sense. #indiechat -9:16 PM Aug 28th, 2012



susankayequinn @SPNHeather You're lucky! My husband barely reads my stuff AFTER it's published. LOL #indiechat -9:17 PM Aug 28th, 2012



laurapauling After I return a beta read with a new beta, I wait and see if they ask again. I like it to be a fair trade. #indiechat -9:17 PM Aug 28th, 2012



chihuahuazero Finding teen betas will be easy for me. Go to lunch table, slam MS table, say "email me!" #indiechat -9:17 PM Aug 28th, 2012



overdunne Hard to find a teen with the knowledge base/focus to be a true CP. But they are great for overall feel and 'lingo' #indiechat -9:17 PM Aug 28th, 2012



laurapauling My husband does not read my stuff. lol #indiechat -9:17 PM Aug 28th, 2012



MaganVernon Okay, I'll throw a different question out there then. In person V online CPs. Who uses what? Do you like one better? #Indiechat -9:17 PM Aug 28th, 2012



JessieHarrell @chihuahuazero goes back to my B, C, D advice. get them to write it in margins if they are bored, confused or don't believe it #indiechat -9:17 PM Aug 28th, 2012



laurapauling @MaganVernon I don't think I'll face to face crit group again. #indiechat I like email. -9:18 PM Aug 28th, 2012



chihuahuazero @MaganVernon I've done only online critiquing. Mostly through Google Docs, which is now Drive. #indiechat -9:18 PM Aug 28th, 2012



EArroyo5 @susankayequinn I'm in the same boat. My kids won't read it either. They think it's too weird. lol #indiechat -9:18 PM Aug 28th, 2012



LawsonWrites @chihuahuazero i have some that I ask general questions to but not really reading upfront. its not a bad idea though #indiechat -9:18 PM Aug 28th, 2012



MaganVernon RT @overdunne: Hard to find a teen with the knowledge base/focus to be a true CP. But they are great for overall feel and 'lingo' #indiechat -9:18 PM Aug 28th, 2012



susankayequinn @MaganVernon I'm mostly online, although I have a monthly SCBWI crit group - they just don't have time to do the crits I need. #indiechat -9:18 PM Aug 28th, 2012



EArroyo5 I know I couldn't do a face to face crit group. I have to process the info alone. #indiechat -9:18 PM Aug 28th, 2012



MaganVernon @chihuahuazero Ive never used Google Docs for critiquing, just word track changes. Hmmm. #Indiechat -9:19 PM Aug 28th, 2012



chihuahuazero It's fortunate that I have an author I can swap MSes with in the future. #indiechat -9:19 PM Aug 28th, 2012



patricialynne07 @MaganVernon I had a friend who was an amazing crit partner. Then I had to move and she got busy with her kids. #indiechat -9:19 PM Aug 28th, 2012



JessieHarrell @MaganVernon I'm all about online CPs. Even my one in-town CP, we still swap e-copies. im not productive face-to-face. #chitchat #indiechat -9:19 PM Aug 28th, 2012



MaganVernon @laurapauling Bad experience with face to face? #Indiechat -9:19 PM Aug 28th, 2012



susankayequinn @EArroyo5 I just realized I have a teen CP - my kid! (He's a writer too) #indiechat -9:19 PM Aug 28th, 2012



chihuahuazero @MaganVernon It's useful if you have more than one beta. I had them leave comments. #indiechat -9:19 PM Aug 28th, 2012



LawsonWrites @laurapauling ha mine either. maybe at the very final edits. like, final. #indiechat -9:20 PM Aug 28th, 2012



susankayequinn @EArroyo5 Face to face groups are awesome for reading story openings - a few pages, you can see if you grab 'em. Or not. #indiechat -9:20 PM Aug 28th, 2012



chihuahuazero @EArroyo5 I'm not sure if I have the PAPER to do face-to-face. #indiechat -9:20 PM Aug 28th, 2012



MaganVernon @susankayequinn We can bring five pages in to my RWA group a month. I use it a lot fr opening pages and romance help. #Indiechat -9:20 PM Aug 28th, 2012



laurapauling @MaganVernon Not a bad exper. But it took up a lot of time. #indiechat I'd rather meet once a month but not twice a month. -9:20 PM Aug 28th, 2012



EArroyo5 @susankayequinn I usually bounce ideas off my kids, but that's as far as they'll go. #indiechat -9:20 PM Aug 28th, 2012



MaganVernon @patricialynne07 Losing an amazing cp sucks! #Indiechat -9:20 PM Aug 28th, 2012



LawsonWrites @MaganVernon I have both, but the in person ones are just for my level 1 reading...content #indiechat -9:21 PM Aug 28th, 2012



EArroyo5 @susankayequinn I'm just not brave enough to do that yet. =) #indiechat -9:21 PM Aug 28th, 2012



susankayequinn RT @MaganVernon: We can bring five pages in to my RWA group a month. I use it a lot fr opening pages and romance help. #indiechat -9:21 PM Aug 28th, 2012



JessieHarrell @susankayequinn I know LM Preston wrangles her kids into her writing. reads to them on road trips & gets feedback #indiechat -9:21 PM Aug 28th, 2012



patricialynne07 @MaganVernon I've lost a couple and have been struggling to find new ones. >.< #indiechat -9:21 PM Aug 28th, 2012



EArroyo5 @chihuahuazero lol #indiechat -9:21 PM Aug 28th, 2012



MaganVernon I'm sorry #Indiechat but I have to bounce. The killer is whining. @susankayequinn @laurapauling and @JessieHarrell will take over! -9:22 PM Aug 28th, 2012



susankayequinn @EArroyo5 Find a friendly group - go first, don't bring pages, just listen. See if they're sharks. :) Then jump in. :) #indiechat -9:22 PM Aug 28th, 2012



chihuahuazero @EArroyo5 I mean, I don't want to take the time to go to a printing place, and school won't like me using their printers. #indiechat -9:22 PM Aug 28th, 2012



EArroyo5 There's a RWA chapter near where I live. I should just do it. #indiechat -9:22 PM Aug 28th, 2012



susankayequinn @MaganVernon Have a good night, Magan! #indiechat -9:23 PM Aug 28th, 2012



EArroyo5 @chihuahuazero I know what you mean. It can get pricey #indiechat -9:23 PM Aug 28th, 2012



JessieHarrell @EArroyo5 totally. RWA or I know our local SCBWI chapter does the same thing at the end of the meetings. #indiechat -9:23 PM Aug 28th, 2012



susankayequinn @EArroyo5 You're not in IL by chance, are you? I've been meaning to go to my local RWA - we could be buddies. :) #indiechat -9:24 PM Aug 28th, 2012



overdunne Hardest part abt having a crit partner- u have 2 crit back! I love reading other's stuff-hard to give honest but pos criticism #indiechat -9:24 PM Aug 28th, 2012



laurapauling @HeatherSunseri I can handle only so many crit partners. And I've had up to 4/5 betas on a story. #indiechat -9:24 PM Aug 28th, 2012



EArroyo5 @susankayequinn Yeah. I can use a buddy. lol #indiechat -9:24 PM Aug 28th, 2012



JessieHarrell @MaganVernon good luck! #indiechat -9:24 PM Aug 28th, 2012



kathkells I would LOVE to find a crit partner. Haven't had much luck these last few years. I write YA thrillers/horror, some contemp. #indiechat -9:25 PM Aug 28th, 2012



laurapauling What are some good guidelines for critiquing and beta reading? #indiechat -9:25 PM Aug 28th, 2012



chihuahuazero Critiquing is something the TV Trope writing forum struggles with. Everyone wants a critique, but not TO critique. #indiechat -9:25 PM Aug 28th, 2012



JessieHarrell @overdunne yes! sometimes it's more work to find the positive ... #indiechat -9:25 PM Aug 28th, 2012



JessieHarrell there is a free group on yalitchat that lets you get feedback on your first 5 and help others in return. good place to find CPs #indiechat -9:26 PM Aug 28th, 2012



susankayequinn @EArroyo5 Wait, you ARE in Illinois -what part? I'm thinking of going to the northwest suburbs chapter - DesPlaines? #indiechat -9:26 PM Aug 28th, 2012



laurapauling How many of you follow that sandwich rule? #indiechat -9:26 PM Aug 28th, 2012



susankayequinn http://t.co/tafweo32 @laurapauling: What are some good guidelines for critiquing and beta reading? #indiechat -9:26 PM Aug 28th, 2012



laurapauling Two positive comments for every negative. I think that applies more to chapter critiques though. #indiechat -9:27 PM Aug 28th, 2012



LawsonWrites Critiquing is hard. My early partners were harsh and set me up to handle almost anything. I try to do the same back. #indiechat -9:27 PM Aug 28th, 2012



EArroyo5 @susankayequinn Me too! I live in Chicago. #indiechat -9:27 PM Aug 28th, 2012



chihuahuazero @laurapauling I aim for more 50/50. #indiechat -9:27 PM Aug 28th, 2012



JessieHarrell @laurapauling I think when critiquing, it's very important not to make the story yours. stick w/in the authors' vision. #indiechat -9:27 PM Aug 28th, 2012



susankayequinn @chihuahuazero This is why swaps are the way to go-I do yours, you do mine (not necessarily at the same time). Accountability #indiechat -9:27 PM Aug 28th, 2012



overdunne @laurapauling not really sandwich, but I try to always end on a good note. #indiechat -9:27 PM Aug 28th, 2012



EArroyo5 Balance the good with the not so good as honestly as you can. #indiechat -9:28 PM Aug 28th, 2012



chihuahuazero @susankayequinn Thinking about it, that's something they haven't really tried out. #indiechat -9:28 PM Aug 28th, 2012



chihuahuazero @ondinal_songs It varies, but it's more of a community than many of the writer's forums I've joined. #indiechat -9:28 PM Aug 28th, 2012



laurapauling @JessieHarrell That's a great one. One that all writers learn. To respect an author's vision for their story. #indiechat -9:28 PM Aug 28th, 2012



overdunne RT @JessieHarrell:I think when critiquing, its very important not to make the story yours. stick w/in the authors vision. <-agree #indiechat -9:29 PM Aug 28th, 2012



JessieHarrell I also try to tell the author WHY I don't understand something. maybe it's intentional on their part or they overlooked it #indiechat -9:29 PM Aug 28th, 2012



laurapauling At the same time, I'm not a newbie and don't need false praise. I just want to make the story better. #indiechat -9:29 PM Aug 28th, 2012



JessieHarrell yep! RT @laurapauling: At the same time, Im not a newbie and dont need false praise. I just want to make the story better. #indiechat -9:30 PM Aug 28th, 2012



laurapauling So much of the criticism is in how we phrase our words. I don't use words like, "Um, really?" #indiechat -9:30 PM Aug 28th, 2012



chihuahuazero Has anyone have any trouble not overhauling a story's prose while being a beta? #indiechat -9:30 PM Aug 28th, 2012



EArroyo5 RT @JessieHarrell: there is a free group on yalitchat that lets you get feedback on your first 5 and help others in return. #indiechat -9:30 PM Aug 28th, 2012



susankayequinn @EArroyo5 Email me! Maybe we can meet up in an RWA mtg in Sept. susankayequinn@comcast.net #indiechat -9:30 PM Aug 28th, 2012



EArroyo5 @overdunne It's hard for me to word my negative thoughts in a good way, if that makes sense. #indiechat -9:31 PM Aug 28th, 2012



laurapauling @chihuahuazero Honestly, during a beta, I stay away from the prose unless I notice a pattern. #indiechat -9:31 PM Aug 28th, 2012



overdunne @JessieHarrell Also agree! I try to tell author where my eye stuck. Where things were confusing. And where I went 'Yes!' #indiechat -9:31 PM Aug 28th, 2012



susankayequinn @laurapauling Yeah, sarcastic crits = not so much helpful! #indiechat -9:31 PM Aug 28th, 2012



EArroyo5 @susankayequinn Will do. =) #indiechat -9:32 PM Aug 28th, 2012



JessieHarrell @chihuahuazero I'm technical, so I'll jump on commas & such, but leave the prose alone unless really awkward #indiechat -9:32 PM Aug 28th, 2012



overdunne @EArroyo5 Yep. I understand that one. Sometimes things are just bad. But it's always a start for better. #indiechat -9:32 PM Aug 28th, 2012



laurapauling I always try and ask the writer what stage the manuscript is in. I'll beta differently for a more polished draft. #indiechat -9:32 PM Aug 28th, 2012



susankayequinn @EArroyo5: @overdunne Keep it personal, meaning "this doesn't work for me" or "I don't understand this" #indiechat -9:32 PM Aug 28th, 2012



chihuahuazero @JessieHarrell I try to stay with technical, but it gets foggy when description comes into play. #indiechat -9:33 PM Aug 28th, 2012



laurapauling How have most of you found your beta readers or crit partners? #indiechat -9:33 PM Aug 28th, 2012



EArroyo5 @overdunne Yes! And it's subjective anyway. It's just my thoughts and I make that as clear as I can. #indiechat -9:33 PM Aug 28th, 2012



JessieHarrell RT @laurapauling I always try and ask the writer what stage the manuscript is in. Ill beta differently for a more polished draft. #indiechat -9:33 PM Aug 28th, 2012



EArroyo5 I found my crit partner through blogs. #indiechat -9:34 PM Aug 28th, 2012



susankayequinn Blogs, chats (!), in person, conferences... @laurapauling: How have most of you found your beta readers or crit partners? #indiechat -9:34 PM Aug 28th, 2012



JessieHarrell I think giving feedback to others is a great way to fine tune your editing skills for use on your own work. #indiechat -9:34 PM Aug 28th, 2012



Froze8 @MaganVernon I love beta reading! :) #indiechat -9:34 PM Aug 28th, 2012



overdunne @laurapauling Twitter! I have one dear and HONEST friend who helps me with small sticky parts though... #indiechat -9:34 PM Aug 28th, 2012



LawsonWrites @laurapauling other writers. Some readers. Most through online networks #indiechat -9:34 PM Aug 28th, 2012



EArroyo5 RT @JessieHarrell: I think giving feedback to others is a great way to fine tune your editing skills for use on your own work. #indiechat -9:34 PM Aug 28th, 2012



chihuahuazero @susankayequinn @laurapauling Friends, in my one/two "major" beta read attempt. #indiechat -9:35 PM Aug 28th, 2012



LynAlmodovar RT @JessieHarrell: I think giving feedback to others is a great way to fine tune your editing skills for use on your own work. #indiechat -9:35 PM Aug 28th, 2012



JessieHarrell My CPs have come from conferences, yalitchat and a "love connection" (mutual friend introduced us) #indiechat -9:35 PM Aug 28th, 2012



overdunne I am open to beta'ing for folks, but I don't have anything ready for trade right now. Will soon...about 15k left in current WIP #indiechat -9:35 PM Aug 28th, 2012



susankayequinn I have to run - have fun indiechatters! #indiechat -9:35 PM Aug 28th, 2012



JessieHarrell My betas are typically my non-writing friends or their kids who don't mind giving feedback or talking through plot, etc. #indiechat -9:35 PM Aug 28th, 2012



chihuahuazero @susankayequinn Good night! #indiechat -9:36 PM Aug 28th, 2012



laurapauling I love having a few where we'll always be willing to trade work. Other betas might end up being a one time thing. That's okay. #indiechat -9:36 PM Aug 28th, 2012



laurapauling At what point in your manuscript do you ask for beta reads or chapter crits? #indiechat -9:36 PM Aug 28th, 2012



EArroyo5 @susankayequinn night. #indiechat -9:36 PM Aug 28th, 2012



chihuahuazero I'm not sure if I should offer to beta read or not, but I'm open in the future. #indiechat -9:37 PM Aug 28th, 2012



chihuahuazero @laurapauling Last time, I asked too early. I'm waiting until I have a more polished draft. #indiechat -9:37 PM Aug 28th, 2012



overdunne @laurapauling after editing first draft. #indiechat -9:37 PM Aug 28th, 2012



EArroyo5 I ask for betas after the ms is as polished as I could get it. CPs look at it much earlier. #indiechat -9:37 PM Aug 28th, 2012



laurapauling @overdunne Me too. I try and do all the major rewrites I can do. Then I ask for betas. #indiechat -9:38 PM Aug 28th, 2012



patricialynne07 I ask for betas after a complete rewrite a few more read throughs. #indiechat -9:38 PM Aug 28th, 2012



LawsonWrites @laurapauling either about midway--if I need plotting advice or when I'm finished. #indiechat -9:38 PM Aug 28th, 2012



JessieHarrell @chihuahuazero I think beta reading is faster than being a CP - CPs have to be more critical IMO #indiechat -9:38 PM Aug 28th, 2012



laurapauling I don't want to start polishing to realize a big plot hole is glaring at me. #indiechat -9:39 PM Aug 28th, 2012



JessieHarrell agree --> RT @EArroyo5: I ask for betas after the ms is as polished as I could get it. CPs look at it much earlier. #indiechat -9:39 PM Aug 28th, 2012



EArroyo5 I gotta go. Great chat. #indiechat -9:39 PM Aug 28th, 2012



MichWritesBooks @jessieharrell @laurapauling Yes! This! #IndieChat -9:39 PM Aug 28th, 2012



laurapauling @EArroyo5 Good night! #indiechat -9:39 PM Aug 28th, 2012



laurapauling But I'll let the reader know that no one else has read it yet. Those betas have the toughest job. #indiechat -9:40 PM Aug 28th, 2012



Addison_Moore Late but thrilled to be here! Betas are gold! #Indiechat -9:40 PM Aug 28th, 2012



overdunne @laurapauling Feels sloppy if I haven't had at least 1 edit. Couldn't bear to share it before...unless it's just a part or scene #indiechat -9:41 PM Aug 28th, 2012



laurapauling @Addison_Moore Hey there! *waves* #indiechat -9:41 PM Aug 28th, 2012



overdunne @EArroyo5 night, night! #indiechat -9:41 PM Aug 28th, 2012



Addison_Moore @HeatherSunseri I agree! And so nice to see you, girl! #Indiechat -9:41 PM Aug 28th, 2012



chihuahuazero Thinking, my early betas were alphas. #indiechat -9:41 PM Aug 28th, 2012



laurapauling @overdunne That would have to be someone I knew well and trusted. #indiechat -9:41 PM Aug 28th, 2012



laurapauling Usually I do some big rewrites have the first beta read. Gets easier after that. #indiechat -9:41 PM Aug 28th, 2012



JessieHarrell @EArroyo5 good night #indiechat -9:41 PM Aug 28th, 2012



kramerhendricks RT @chihuahuazero: Thinking, my early betas were alphas. #indiechat -9:42 PM Aug 28th, 2012



LynAlmodovar RT @EArroyo5: I ask for betas after the ms is as polished as I could get it. CPs look at it much earlier. #indiechat -9:42 PM Aug 28th, 2012



chihuahuazero Maybe I should leave early...but I don't know what to first. Blog post, typing up rough draft, getting back to novel... #indiechat -9:42 PM Aug 28th, 2012



overdunne @laurapauling also personally feel I'd be wasting their time if it wasn't ready for other eyes. #indiechat -9:42 PM Aug 28th, 2012



LawsonWrites I've also started drafting the whole story & then put it "away" for a bit. During that time I get out the prior book and polish #indiechat -9:42 PM Aug 28th, 2012



laurapauling @overdunne I agree. I do all the work I can do first. #indiechat -9:42 PM Aug 28th, 2012



LynAlmodovar RT @laurapauling: But I'll let the reader know that no one else has read it yet. Those betas have the toughest job. #indiechat -9:43 PM Aug 28th, 2012



Addison_Moore @SPNHeather Absolute write forums? Not sure about that one. @NathanBransford has forums you might try. @JessieHarrell #Indiechat -9:43 PM Aug 28th, 2012



laurapauling Has anyone ever had a partner read over an outline or synopsis? #indiechat -9:43 PM Aug 28th, 2012



JessieHarrell so it seems like most people use betas later for polishing and CPs early to vet out the bugs/holes/etc. #indiechat -9:43 PM Aug 28th, 2012



laurapauling I found long time friends and crit partners on Critique Circle. #indiechat -9:43 PM Aug 28th, 2012



laurapauling I don't frequent it very often anymore though. Great place to get started. #indiechat -9:44 PM Aug 28th, 2012



Addison_Moore @SPNHeather I still think friends and family are great too!!!! ;) @JessieHarrell #Indiechat -9:44 PM Aug 28th, 2012



overdunne One thing I do like about betas- the feeling of a deadline. If I know I've got a time to work toward I work more efficiently. #indiechat -9:44 PM Aug 28th, 2012



SPNHeather @Addison_Moore Thank you so much Addison! #indiechat @JessieHarrell -9:44 PM Aug 28th, 2012



JessieHarrell @laurapauling oh, I did that with my recent novel idea. wanted to see if CP thought plot sounded engaging enough. #indiechat -9:44 PM Aug 28th, 2012



laurapauling @JessieHarrell I use a beta after major rewrites and also after I polish...just to make sure. #indiechat -9:44 PM Aug 28th, 2012



chihuahuazero @laurapauling Me either. #indiechat -9:44 PM Aug 28th, 2012



Addison_Moore @LawsonWrites I agree. Time apart always helps. #Indiechat -9:44 PM Aug 28th, 2012



JessieHarrell @Addison_Moore true. I get hubby to listen to my guy dialog so he can tell me how to make it sound more "guy" #indiechat -9:45 PM Aug 28th, 2012



laurapauling How has the critique process changed for any of you with self publishing? #indiechat -9:45 PM Aug 28th, 2012



laurapauling I don't feel like I have time for a 6 month chapter to chapter crit like I used to. #indiechat Not sure anyone does. -9:46 PM Aug 28th, 2012



LawsonWrites @Addison_Moore yes. and i use different readers for each time. By the time the 1st readers see it finished it's a different book #indiechat -9:46 PM Aug 28th, 2012



Addison_Moore @laurapauling *Hugs Laura* #Indiechat -9:46 PM Aug 28th, 2012



KristineAsselin @laurapauling Saw your thread about #betas on #indiechat...I'm about half way. Not that I'm feeling guilty about being slow or anything. :) -9:46 PM Aug 28th, 2012



LawsonWrites @laurapauling what do you mean how? #indiechat -9:46 PM Aug 28th, 2012



overdunne @laurapauling I'm still feeling it out. Today is official epub day on Amazon for debut novel (shameless self promo) so still new! #indiechat -9:47 PM Aug 28th, 2012



Addison_Moore @LawsonWrites Same here. It always keeps morphing. #Indiechat -9:47 PM Aug 28th, 2012



JessieHarrell @laurapauling Time is a factor with indie publishing, but so is quality & I want as many eyes on my work as I can get. #indiechat -9:47 PM Aug 28th, 2012



laurapauling @LawsonWrites I find myself not languishing over the opening like I did before querying agents. #indiechat -9:47 PM Aug 28th, 2012



laurapauling @overdunne YOu released your novel today? #indiechat -9:48 PM Aug 28th, 2012



LawsonWrites @laurapauling yes! totally! I know exactly what you mean. I now write for the reader not the agent #indiechat -9:48 PM Aug 28th, 2012



overdunne @laurapauling Yes! Today is my book birthday, AND my real birthday! :) :) #indiechat -9:49 PM Aug 28th, 2012



JessieHarrell @overdunne CONGRATS! That's awesome. #indiechat -9:49 PM Aug 28th, 2012



overdunne Mind you, still working with Createspace for the paperback version. #indiechat -9:49 PM Aug 28th, 2012



laurapauling @overdunne Okay, share the link and title, please! #indiechat Congrats! -9:49 PM Aug 28th, 2012



Addison_Moore @overdunne Happy double birthday!!!! @laurapauling #Indiechat -9:50 PM Aug 28th, 2012



JessieHarrell @overdunne I did the same thing when I released Destined last year (on my b-day) = double cause to celebrate! #indiechat -9:50 PM Aug 28th, 2012



laurapauling @overdunne So cool. Happy Birthday! #indiechat -9:50 PM Aug 28th, 2012



chihuahuazero Going to write a blog post. G'night fellow writers! #indiechat -9:50 PM Aug 28th, 2012



LawsonWrites @overdunne congrats! #indiechat -9:50 PM Aug 28th, 2012



overdunne @JessieHarrell :) Thanks! It's been a super birthday for me. #indiechat -9:50 PM Aug 28th, 2012



JessieHarrell I'm thinking we should have a way for ppl here tonight to swap info if they are looking for betas/CPs. #indiechat -9:51 PM Aug 28th, 2012



patricialynne07 @overdunne Congrats and happy birthday! =D #indiechat -9:51 PM Aug 28th, 2012



chihuahuazero RT @JessieHarrell: I'm thinking we should have a way for ppl here tonight to swap info if they are looking for betas/CPs. #indiechat -9:51 PM Aug 28th, 2012



JessieHarrell feel free to leave a comment on the Indelibles blog under the transcript post if you're looking... #indiechat -9:52 PM Aug 28th, 2012



laurapauling @chihuahuazero Good night! Glad you stopped by! #indiechat -9:52 PM Aug 28th, 2012



overdunne It's called TREASURE IN THE FLAME (YA historical fiction/fantasy) and can be found here... http://t.co/MGl2GT9i #indiechat -9:52 PM Aug 28th, 2012



laurapauling Good idea. RT @JessieHarrell: feel free to leave a comment on the Indelibles blog under the transcript post if you're looking... #indiechat -9:52 PM Aug 28th, 2012



HeyItsFishy RT @JessieHarrell: feel free to leave a comment on the Indelibles blog under the transcript post if you're looking... #indiechat -9:52 PM Aug 28th, 2012



JessieHarrell http://t.co/iTWtJLBs leave your name, contact and the genre you write #indiechat -9:53 PM Aug 28th, 2012



laurapauling RT @overdunne: It's called TREASURE IN THE FLAME (YA historical fiction/fantasy) and can be found here... http://t.co/tlqp6zmD #indiechat -9:53 PM Aug 28th, 2012



LM_Preston Sorry I missed most of #indiechat -9:53 PM Aug 28th, 2012



laurapauling @overdunne Sounds terrific. I love treasure maps! #indiechat -9:54 PM Aug 28th, 2012



JessieHarrell @LM_Preston awww... missed you. you were one of my first (& greatest) beta readers. #indiechat -9:54 PM Aug 28th, 2012



laurapauling any other comments or questions about crit partners and/or beta readers? #indiechat -9:55 PM Aug 28th, 2012



IndieAuthorNews INDIE or TRADITIONAL: Should you make the Jump? ? http://t.co/ys7V81ur ? #WritingTips #IndieChat #SelfPub -9:55 PM Aug 28th, 2012



JessieHarrell oh, final tip: find out what the person ur reading for wants. if they don't want line edits, don't waste ur time #indiechat -9:55 PM Aug 28th, 2012